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Poetry Tracks In the Snow's avatar

Thank you @Pelle Martens for restacking ๐ŸŒป

Antonio Castellaneta's avatar

There are places the body remembers before the mind does. Returning to them can collapse, in an instant, all the distance the years have built. That โ€œmy phone and so much moreโ€ holds everything in such painful simplicity. A deeply human poem.

Poetry Tracks In the Snow's avatar

Thank you Antonio, you are spot on. I was not ready for what hit me when I walked into the rental car lobby. I appreciate you ๐Ÿ’›

Mahdi Meshkatee's avatar

Hey Holly,

Thank you for sharing such a heartbreaking, haunting poem here.

Best,

Mahdi

Poetry Tracks In the Snow's avatar

Thank you Mahdi for understanding ๐Ÿ’›

Bexiexz Poetry House's avatar

Antonio Castellaneta said it best, "There are places the body remembers before the mind does."

Rajani Radhakrishnan's avatar

They physical reaction to some emotions is so real, Holly. I felt this poem and your pain. For me it is as if my stomach hollows out and begins to eat into my chest - yeah that makes no sense but it feels real all the same. Thank you for writing and sharing this poem.

Poetry Tracks In the Snow's avatar

Yes, the hollowing out. I know this feeling too. Thank you for feeling this one with me (isnโ€™t poetry a gift in this way) and for restacking ๐Ÿ’›๐ŸŒป๐Ÿ’›

Rajani Radhakrishnan's avatar

A total gift! โค๏ธ๐Ÿ™

Boo Pfeiffer's avatar

This is so real; I felt this so completely.

Poetry Tracks In the Snow's avatar

Thanks Boo, it was very much real; thank you for feeling it too ๐Ÿ’›

The Sawyer's Daughter's avatar

Iโ€™m sorry for your loss and you had to endure in those agonizing frustrating moments.

Poetry Tracks In the Snow's avatar

Thank you Julie ๐Ÿ’›๐Ÿ™

Charles Merisi's avatar

"my phone and so much more". Some memories do burn. I'm so sorry for your loss.

Poetry Tracks In the Snow's avatar

Thank you Charles ๐Ÿ’›

ELIZABETH ARDITTI's avatar

What a father Mr Austin wasโ€ฆ

Poetry Tracks In the Snow's avatar

Thank you E ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ’›๐Ÿ™

Stephanie Carney's avatar

I am so sorry for your loss of father. I can only imagine that some deep part of his unconscious could and still can perceive your love rushing toward him in both a goodbye and a hello.

As for your beautiful poem, Antonio's words encapsulate in such a beautiful way my thoughts as well.

Thank you Holly.

Poetry Tracks In the Snow's avatar

Thank you Stephanie for your generosity of spirit and kindness ๐Ÿ’›

Pelle Martens's avatar

grief can live in the body in such unexpected ways ๐Ÿ’” Iโ€™m sorry this place brought everything back so vividly. Nevertheless, this was a beautiful read Holy ๐Ÿค

Poetry Tracks In the Snow's avatar

Pelle - thank you for reading and understanding! The body knows what the mind wishes to minimize!