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Alex Dawson's avatar

Fantastic Holly 🖤 love what you’ve done with it!

Poetry Tracks In the Snow's avatar

I loved your suggestion and where it took me - thanks Alex and thanks for restacking 💚

Poetry Outdoors's avatar

I love the speed of this 💛

Mahdi Meshkatee's avatar

The words read as if their speaker cannot burden the heft of truth anymore, Holly.

Poetry Tracks In the Snow's avatar

Mahdi - each new day has at least one example of “hating the other” and you are correct it is heavy. And I wonder how we get off the train when algorithms feed us the side of the story it thinks we want.

carol bennett's avatar

One way I could spend less time "on the train" would be to walk around the yard, look at the lake in the morning. But I get my cup of coffee and open the NY Times on my computer. It's such a habit! Spending half an hour at noon with a few friends to dip in Lake Superior gets me off the train. Crazy fun!

Poetry Tracks In the Snow's avatar

Crazy and fun - brrrr! Someday, I’ll have to try it?!?