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Thank you John @John Muntges for restacking 🌻🌻

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Thank you @Gillian Wray for restacking. I appreciate you πŸ’›

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Such a beautiful poem. It really touched me.

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Thank you againπŸ’›

The Sawyer's Daughter's avatar

How nice! I love your β€˜slowfall’ and β€˜slowwalk’ words. πŸ€—

Susan Fernbach's avatar

Yes! Came here to say I love the newly coined words. They’re perfect!

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Thank you Julie and Susan - I loved the mashing of words for this piece as β€œwalk” and β€œfall” just weren’t enough to speak to the sacred beauty of this invitation.

Tony R's avatar

You have been teaching me how to bird for a long time from your poems. You also been teaching me how to dog and lots of other things. Thank you, Professor and friend!

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Ah, Tony - it’s your turn to teach me how to glass πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰

Karin J Lindquist's avatar

Lovely lovely lovely.

Peace on the 4th!!!

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Isn’t that just the perfect invitation to fall in love with this world; Happy 4th Karin πŸ’™β€οΈπŸ’™

Karin J Lindquist's avatar

Absolutely. I miss you and so appreciate your poetry.

Sam Aureli's avatar

Love this! I was observing the birds closely yesterday, and wondered what it would be like.

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Thanks Sam 🌻

Laura Coleman's avatar

I love this, β€œteach me how to bird,” and β€œslowfall in love with this world.” πŸͺΆπŸ™πŸΌπŸͺΆ

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Thanks so much Laura🌻

Marie Charon's avatar

This was really touching.

Teach me how to bird

how to soulwake early and expect wonder

how to slowfall in love with this world just as it is

on a spring morning full of heartsong

Wow. 🀩

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Good to hear your voice Marie and thank you for being here πŸ’›πŸŒ»πŸ’›

Ana Lisa de Jong's avatar

This poems takes me on a lovely walk in the woods, thank you x

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Thank you Ana Lisa πŸ’›

Kris Haig's avatar

Isn't it wonderful to know how to bird? Thank you for explaining it so beautifully and evocatively!

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One of my favorite things Kris; you too?

Kris Haig's avatar

Since I was a child!

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Lucky you, I started birding in my 40’s. Since then, I’ve always wondered how it would have changed my life had I started as a child.

Amrita Skye Blaine's avatar

Just beautiful, Holly! Thank you. I, too, join words together: wrensong, heartmind and others.

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Thanks Amrita - it’s fun and in this case, helped to set the tone πŸ’›

Antonio Castellaneta's avatar

This feels less like a poem about birds and more like a lesson in paying attention. I especially loved the gentle progression from seeing to naming, and from naming to belonging. Sometimes wonder begins exactly where we learn to slow down. Thank you for this beautiful piece.

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Antonio - thank you for sharing your thoughtful reflection and noticing the progression. I am learning the gifts that slowing down can give. 🌻🌻🌻

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Thank you @jemuntges for restacking 🌻

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Thank you @jaltazar for restacking 🌻