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Jeanne Vessantra's avatar

I love how the fire metaphor is so polyvalent - not only as something that continuously burns in nature, but also as a metaphor for the human condition.

Poetry Tracks In the Snow's avatar

Thank you Jeanne - and thank you for giving me a new word “polyvalent”. I admit I had to look that one up. 💚

Pat Kruse's avatar

Man has from the beginning had a fascination with fire, the ashes of uncontrolled rage are yet another wonderment… we all ask the WHY. Thanks Holly, excellent perspective, well penned.

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Love hearing your perspective and thoughtful response to fire danger. Thanks Pat 🧡

Tracey Cullen's avatar

Really powerful, Holly. I'm so glad you reminded me of this poem. I finally found the courage to read it (yes, I fear fire as much as you do!). Rev. Taylor's comments are spot-on.

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Thanks Tracey and thank you for reading this one. Loved our time on the trail yesterday.

Debora Tremont's avatar

Amen. So beautifully said. ♥️

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Thank you Debora 💛

Rev. Kevin T. Taylor's avatar

Holly, I appreciate how this poem uses wildfire as both a literal and moral metaphor. The movement from dry grass and forests to screens, politics, and public life is especially effective because it suggests that what spreads destruction is often less a single spark than an accumulation of unattended fuel. The lines "Carelessness and caring less are causative, not curative" stayed with me because they capture the difference between reacting to flames and addressing the conditions that allow them to spread. Thank you for offering a reflection that calls for both vigilance and kindness, reminding us that the cultivation of humanity requires as much intentional care as the protection of a forest.

Poetry Tracks In the Snow's avatar

Such a wise and thoughtful reflection of my poem. Your words are a gift, thank you 🙏 💛

Judy Roggow's avatar

Here, Here! Wekk said.

Marcia Hyatt's avatar

Another powerful poem!

The Sawyer's Daughter's avatar

Love and appreciate the dual-pronged themes in this thoughtful message.

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Thanks so much Julie💛

Gilly Pawson's avatar

Thank you. Beautifully expressed

Ellen Rowland's avatar

poignant and true, Holly.

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Thanks Ellen. This was a hard one to condense as there was too much that could be said.

Amrita Skye Blaine's avatar

Good one, Holly. I love how you mix the real threat of fire with the real threat of burning ourselves down as a society.

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Thanks Amrita - sadly, both are real and dangerous

Karen Athy-Penrose's avatar

Well said, Holly!

Peter Dixon's avatar

Your summary speaks volumes for the plight we face, thanks for caring❤️

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Thank you Peter; it’s a sad state

Karin J Lindquist's avatar

Haven't we???? We hardly realize we're on fire!

Thanks for this-I love it. (And don't like fire!!!!)

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“We hardly realize we are on fire”. Well said Karin🧡

Sue Kempe's avatar

Sometimes it hard to “like” a piece, even though it resonates. You know what I mean.

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I absolutely do Sue; thank you!